IsaakI think that you did a good job in saying solutions for sibling rivalry.You could add a adio to explain the book more.Dylan
i like how you did really good on listing a lot of comments. One thing you could improve on is making the slide more faster.
Great job! You really did talk a lot about them! Just make it faster. Okay
The part I liked is that sliding thing but the you need to improve on is just writing because I think you wasted your time just for that sliding thing.
I think the sliding thing was really cool and you had good information I didn't know it included physical harm.
Isaak
ReplyDeleteI think that you did a good job in saying solutions for sibling rivalry.You could add a adio to explain the book more.
Dylan
i like how you did really good on listing a lot of comments. One thing you could improve on is making the slide more faster.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! You really did talk a lot about them! Just make it faster. Okay
ReplyDeleteThe part I liked is that sliding thing but the you need to improve on is just writing because I think you wasted your time just for that sliding thing.
ReplyDeleteI think the sliding thing was really cool and you had good information
ReplyDeleteI didn't know it included physical harm.